Oooh, lovely! I like the way humans aren't really real for War -- of course they're not, not on her plane of action. //But history was gaining speed around her now, echoes of her potential rolling back to her present with the momentum of a cannonball dropped onto the Earth with laser pinpointed accuracy and a nuclear payload.// -- that's really nice, and I love this last line: implicit competition, War and Pollution competing to destroy the world. Thank you!

~ Clodia