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odditycollector ([personal profile] odditycollector) wrote 2011-04-03 08:50 am (UTC)

Well, I'm not unhappy with it, honestly, for what it is. Mostly I'd swap 'graphed over' for, ah, maybe 'plotted by' so I don't overuse 'graph' for no payoff. But tweaking poems is dangerous- worse than fic! -because they are so mood dependent.
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