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odditycollector ([personal profile] odditycollector) wrote2009-08-04 02:52 pm

Legion of Everyone, deleted scenes.

Here are a couple "extra scenes" I made along with the Legion of Super-heroes pages of a couple days ago. Characters I was curious to see in the new universe, but didn't show up really in the first issue.

These are even less finished than the pages I posted yesterday, so I made them extra small in the hopes you will not notice too much. (And you'll have to ignore the cos-playing white kids in the backgrounds. I don't know *where* they wandered in from.)

Nura:



Verdict: ADORABLE. Click for animated gif of before and after.

PS, comics layout people. Having a character pull a, "My eyes are up *here*!" and then pasting the giant panel of said eyes over top of that character's boobs? Kind of a mixed message.


Irma:



I knew going in that I was going to steal someone's melanin. You may be confused, as this was supposed to be the *anti*-whitewashing the Legion project, but I challenge you to find me kickass portrayals of people with Albinism. I will wait. (And be honestly enthusiastic if you know of any! Pass that shit on! For my part, I submit Elijah Snow of Warren Ellis' Planetary.)

No gif, because you can see what she looked like in the panels I didn't change.


Garth:



Because you have to collect *all* the founders, and also I wanted to see how the changes I made to Ayla translated. Verdict: needs tweaking, I think. Maybe less chin (my answer for *everyone*)? Click for gif.

And I also did Brin, but I messed that up entirely and you are missing nothing.

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